CHAPTER 1
soojung is brushing her teeth when someone knock her
apartment door, she quickly to open the door. When she opened the door, she see
a stranger who she never see before, standing in front her apartment. Then, the
girl ask soojung.
“annyeonghaseyo, this is jung soojung-ssi house,right?”
asked the stranger.
“nee, true, this is my house, is there anything you need?” answered
soojung confusedly.
“oh, let me introduce my self first, my name is park soori.
I’m a secretary manager from xx company and I come here to tell soojung-ssi
that you won the lottery that you participate last week. The prize is you can
go to Singapore and get a voucher to stay in mbs hotel for a week.” Explained
the secretary.
“really? I’m really won the lottery?” asked soojung back
happily.
“yes, soojung-ssi. You win the lottery and you can take it
in our company. You can take it today until next week and when you go to take
it, after you arrived our company, you must show your identity card to the
receptionist first.” Explained the secretary. “nee, arraseo,kamsahabnida.
Thankyou that soori-ssi want to come here to announce it to me.”
“nee,soojung-ssi. I’ll first, Thankyou for your time to let me announce this
matter to you.” Said the secretary before leave. “nee,kamsahabnida.” said
soojung before close her apartment door.
Now soojung sit happily on her bed with the thought of
spending time in her holiday with her boyfriend, tao.
Two hours later, soojung already standing in front the xx
company, then she enter the company and said to the receptionist that someone
has come to her home this morning and said that she won a lottery from this
company” explained soojung to the receptionist.
“can you tell me what’s your name and show me your identity
card, miss?”
“sure, my name is jung soojung , I live in myeongdong street
and this is my identity card.”
“nee,jung soojung-ssi,you won a lottery from this company.
Chukkahaeyo, soojung-ssi. Let me take you to our manager room to take
soojung-ssi’s prize.” Said the receptionist whie bring soojung to the manager
room and after soojung entered the room. The manager explain about the prize,
the trip, and give the prize to soojung. Soojung ask to leave politely,
handshake with the manager and them leave the company.
After soojung leave the company, she quickly call her
boyfriend and tell him about the prize and ask him to go with her, her
boyfriend say yes with pleasure to her.
So, what will happen in the next chapter?
just wait for the next chapter.
just wait for the next chapter.
Author’s note : Sorry if my English is so bad, because English isn’t my
first language.
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and don't forget to comment to give me advice
also don't forget to like or subscribe if you like it..:)
So, hope you like it..
Happy reading everyone!
With love♥
xx,vina wugold.
I think you should describe more about the surrounding as well as Soo jung's expression as well as how she acts or feel when she receives a prize, it will make your chap longer and the readers will feel more emotional :D And you used too much the word 'Soojung', you can replace it with she, it's okay :D
ReplyDeleteThe first chap is too short that I can't comment more about the content :D I'll wait for the second chap, fighting :D
okk.. thanks for the suggestion.. :)
ReplyDeletei'll try to make it more better in the next chapter..
i'll make it not too formal..
happy readinggg..:D
xx,vinawugold:)